Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Girl power YA! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love, love, loved this chapter! I realize Ken and Georgia still have ways to go, but it would be nice if this signifies a slight turn for the better. I loved Georgia having a sense of dominance and I hope you give us a little more of that here and there, Ken clearly needs it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was an amazing chapter I love the chase . now I would love to see a damsel in distress moment . or another chase would work lol. update soon I can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() would be a good word to describe this series! Really is sensational must be said, cupcakes and chocolate for you! Well, i read the first Provenance as weel, but i must say i love Kenny! He is a complete and utter douche but him and Georgia, finally she slapped him...it was neccessary. Anyway, please update, i know you are busy and what not, CONGRATS ON YOUR WEDDING! Anyway, when you get a chance update, dont abandon the story or i will be truly sad and weepy. Mkay, thats about it for now! Sincerely, Kylen |
![]() ![]() ![]() EP! I've been waiting so long for this update. um, kennie and Georgia are my favorate characters please update! I want to see where this goes, |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm just read the first story and than continued on to this one and ken seriously has daddy issues...but wow this story is great...including the one befor it..left me wondering if the little girl did mark or not..damn that insuffrible cliff hanger..XD can't wait to see what you do with this story...gorgia may need to grow a back bone...but just so you know your a damn good writer and this story is awsom |
![]() ![]() I love this story. It's amazing. Please update it more often. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update your stories already women. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome love it so far! Can't wait till the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it like i always do i hope that vase hit some sense into that egoistic bastard. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved that Georgia fought back! LOL I love the advice Ashland's father gave Georgia, in his own way, telling her she has the right to deny Kenneth. Wonderful update. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! please update SON! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() plz update soon cnt wait XD PS could u make it a bit more longer ? if was really getting good and i hope she keeps it up (standing up 4 herself i mean, hopefull she listen 2 the guy what she talked to by the way who is he? plz update soon |