Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive
sillygoose2008 chapter 8 . 12/24/2010
I love this chapter can't wait for more.
Tod chapter 8 . 12/21/2010
I'd love to see Georgia just calmingly confront her and ashame her. Plus, Georgia should totatally be aloof about it. Like "So what? He slept with other women; I slept with other guys, too. Only difference is my guys were decent people who love me.". I bet that would kill Danielle because no one loves her and Ken was just using her. She's nothing different than a blow up "toy". Useless after you wear them out. You just throw them away and replace them with another.
Gypsy28 chapter 8 . 12/19/2010
Well, I'm still waiting for the redeeming to start. I pity Kenneth who is obviously confused due to his instinctual feelings for his mate and the family party line regarding humans. So far, I can't see why Georgia would stay with him. I'm waiting for the redeeming qualities to do more than peek through. Oh, and someone needs to bitch slap Danielle. NOW.
Jennyt82 chapter 8 . 12/15/2010
Now Ken...breaking down the door isn't going to solve anything...

He brings these things upon himself really.

Another great chapter. It's great that you're off hiatus. Update soon.
alechandro chapter 8 . 12/15/2010
amazing !
Da-zGreen chapter 8 . 12/14/2010
Wow, poor Georgia. I just feel so much sympathy for her. Stupid Kennie. When will he grow balls and see that he doesn't need Danielle. And when will Danielle learn to stop beinig such a slut. Anyways, love that you put Marilin and Phobe back in here. Glad that you are back from hiatus. Hope you update soon!
Amelya chapter 8 . 12/14/2010
What a great come back chapter! Including Georgias thoughts on Kenny's parents was a brilliant idea. I liked to revisit Marilein and can't wait for the alfa to make an appearance too.

Georgia and Kenny have become my favourite characters in this story although it was a bit difficult to follow them in the beginning. So many things happened that weren't featured in the previous story. I hope you'll be tempted to write a flashback oneshot or two.
apple chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Congrats on graduating! Love that you started updating again and can't wait for the next chapter. Happy holidays.
horse4ever chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
please write more
Midnight113 chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
Awesome chapter! I loved it, lots of drama and tension between the characters. Dani is something alright, you're doing a great job with their personalities. Keep it up!
Crimsonlotus chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
so happy u updated which is y i think you should do it again and soon !
G4U15 chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
About time you posted again).Please write more.
AMZIEXXX chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
finally you updated!

Love it can't wait for the next chapter!

Amz

xx
Ck90 chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
I wonder if Kenny's promise to try and change vanished when he reached North Dakota? Is Mar pregnant already? I am so glad to see that you updated! I was dying out here! Can't wait to read more! Hope that everything is well with you!
Dahlia Inscription chapter 8 . 12/13/2010
yaay, I'm so happy you updated! I loved hating Danielle in this chapter, her bitchyness was for updating again,

Dahlia
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