Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() I'd love to see Georgia just calmingly confront her and ashame her. Plus, Georgia should totatally be aloof about it. Like "So what? He slept with other women; I slept with other guys, too. Only difference is my guys were decent people who love me.". I bet that would kill Danielle because no one loves her and Ken was just using her. She's nothing different than a blow up "toy". Useless after you wear them out. You just throw them away and replace them with another. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm still waiting for the redeeming to start. I pity Kenneth who is obviously confused due to his instinctual feelings for his mate and the family party line regarding humans. So far, I can't see why Georgia would stay with him. I'm waiting for the redeeming qualities to do more than peek through. Oh, and someone needs to bitch slap Danielle. NOW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now Ken...breaking down the door isn't going to solve anything... He brings these things upon himself really. Another great chapter. It's great that you're off hiatus. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() amazing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, poor Georgia. I just feel so much sympathy for her. Stupid Kennie. When will he grow balls and see that he doesn't need Danielle. And when will Danielle learn to stop beinig such a slut. Anyways, love that you put Marilin and Phobe back in here. Glad that you are back from hiatus. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great come back chapter! Including Georgias thoughts on Kenny's parents was a brilliant idea. I liked to revisit Marilein and can't wait for the alfa to make an appearance too. Georgia and Kenny have become my favourite characters in this story although it was a bit difficult to follow them in the beginning. So many things happened that weren't featured in the previous story. I hope you'll be tempted to write a flashback oneshot or two. |
![]() ![]() Congrats on graduating! Love that you started updating again and can't wait for the next chapter. Happy holidays. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! I loved it, lots of drama and tension between the characters. Dani is something alright, you're doing a great job with their personalities. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so happy u updated which is y i think you should do it again and soon ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() About time you posted again).Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally you updated! Love it can't wait for the next chapter! Amz xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Kenny's promise to try and change vanished when he reached North Dakota? Is Mar pregnant already? I am so glad to see that you updated! I was dying out here! Can't wait to read more! Hope that everything is well with you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yaay, I'm so happy you updated! I loved hating Danielle in this chapter, her bitchyness was for updating again, Dahlia |