Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive
coeur-d'ange chapter 4 . 6/17/2010
wow..i'm so unsure about ken!

he hit her! and now he could possibly kill the other guy Georgia was with.

then again it was her fault for the other guy..but still..HE HIT HER! not cool

great chapter! can't wait till the next one!
violetlolita chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
I love your stories! I'm rooting for the two of them, but I hope Ken comes to his senses and stops abusing her. Abusive men are just the worst. :(
cRaZeDrEvIeWeR chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
ah, i love your stories, but i HATE kenneth. possessive, abusive, controlling guys always rub me the wrong way, & it bothers me, even if he is slightly insane, lol. & georgia seems so weak, just letting him treat her that way; he would've had to drag me out my house, kicking,screaming & biting! lol, i'm hoping that things will change for them though, can't wait to see how you further evolve their relationship.
Letyne chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
Thanks for this new chapter
elle chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
ugh, i seriously hate it when men hit the women. it just crawls underneath my skin! But i'm hoping he'll get better. I don't like alex.
Eccthlacine chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Ohh. Dramatic. I guess this one is going to be a bit darker? Glad to see you jumped right into another story. There seem to be quite a few silly mistakes? Like you wrote it quickly? Can't wait for more updates from you :)
Midnight113 chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
Poor Alex, I wonder if Ken's going to kill him or not. Hmm... well I'm impressed he found her so fast anyway. Can't wait to see what happens next!
darkgurl92 chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
not kill ken cause if he did georgias not going to forgive him

glad that ken found her though..update time..
Crissy19 chapter 3 . 6/15/2010
Wtf. ken is really crazy huh? i dont think any of us knew he was this the story btw. update soon.
darkgurl92 chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
ah..feel sorry for keenie..

he should get better so he can go and get his georgia

back..update soon
elle chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
omfg! kenny hit her? :O

oh hell naw. he should be

punish severely! .
Midnight113 chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
Cue the drama with this Alex. I'm sure Kennie's gonna want to kill the poor guy. He just doesn't know what he's getting into does he? Kennie is kinda crazy and possessive but I guess I can't blame him, lol. Can't wait to read more!
Midnight113 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Mass Effect 2 rocks! Sorry I just had to say that. ;) Loved that chapter, I like how she revealed her situation to them. Well done!
ChristianAngel01 chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
whoa I cant believe it! they went on a date and kennie there is absolutely bonkers man he will kill alex for sure on the last piece about "Or she would be no one's." line did he mean that he will kill anyone who touches her or... will he kill her? that would be scary...great chapter though
ChristianAngel01 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
whoa i want to know what will kenneth do when hefinds out about alex lol probably try and kill him
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