Reviews for Provenance II: Still Alive
lg chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
Hi, I just started your story and it's very good. Quick note on the Spanish, though. I think a better wording would be to say "llego a casa para encontrar que ella tiene miedo a ti. If I made a mistake I apologize but that's more like the Spanish I've heard. Sorry to nitpick, though! Again, good job on the writing.
csorciere chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Did I miss something? There's only 10 chapters showing on the first story...have they been lost? I'm almost afraid to go any further on this one. I'm very interested in reading this, but perhaps it's better if I wait until Provenance I is whole?
Guest chapter 23 . 12/24/2012
Are you ever going to update? I have been waiting for an update for so long.. What happened?
BratFace chapter 23 . 12/4/2012
I am starting to think you don't want Georgia and Ken to be happy, just kill them already and end their fictional suffering
hawt chapter 23 . 12/4/2012
Please please pretty please write more
Crash3009 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
I have followed the one before this and now this! LOVE it, i really hope to see this finished some day :)
Robin chapter 23 . 10/22/2012
Dun dun dun... Cliffhanger. Anyways interesting chapter with lots of suspense and thriller. Keep updating Poe favor LOL
cauterized chapter 23 . 8/20/2012
Nice plot twist. I wasn't expecting that at all.
NoName chapter 23 . 7/23/2012
I think I like Georgia and Ken's story better than Merilein and Ashland's. I may be coming off a bit biased when I say that Merilein is turning annoying. I know that as the Alpha's mate she shouldn't be discouraging other humans who aren't used to the idea of mates and mating but sometimes I feel she gets a bit self-centered. Before she became a wolf she was a bit like Georgia, running and hiding. Now that she is one she all of a sudden can't seem to emphatize with what it's like to be a human mated to a wolf. It's like all of a sudden just because things are smooth for her now she can't see that others will have problems. Eh, oh well. I guess I just expected a lot more from a supposed friend, I like Pheobe though. I also want the story to be set in Alaska! :D
Violet96 chapter 23 . 7/18/2012
Do a story in japan!
WildLikeTheWolves chapter 3 . 6/29/2012
Nice story. Just as interesting as your other stories. Also, a question. I used to think that Georgia had dark brown hair, but now I know she had blonde, and that makes me wonder what all the characters in this story (and maybe in the other stories) look like. Could you answer that for me?
Overall, I love this story very much. Keep it going!
bookworm6193 chapter 23 . 6/28/2012
Great chapter!
akaCHEEKS chapter 23 . 6/23/2012
Wow, it's been a long time since I logged on to FP! I'm glad to see that you recently updated this story, though. I can't wait for Georgia and Ken to finally start moving in the right direction in their relationship. I remember you mentioned that Ashland's father still have a few more advice to give Georgia in handling Ken; when are we going to read a few more chapters on that? I mean, I'm glad Georgia and Ken seem to be getting along well, but they still have a pretty long way to go before they can become comfortable in their relationship.
Midnight113 chapter 23 . 6/21/2012
Great cliffy, I'm excited to see what happens now between them. Also, would love to see a story set in Japan. Update soon!
Jennyt82 chapter 23 . 6/20/2012
You write about whatever makes you happy. It'll be amazing whether it's set in Japan or Alaska.
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