Reviews for Pyromania
AterAeterna chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Ah yes I do agree with Lopsided the "ablaze" at the end was too much but I didnt know how to finish it, luckily thanks to the inspiration of a good friend I am now changing it. So enjoy all

aX
Lopsidedsmile chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
This attempt is quite good and when read aloud has a nice ring to the ears despite the words ) but I must say near the end the word 'ablaze' gets a little too much. Although I understand it was meant as a repitition to put the feeling across; I am not a fan of it, not sure it works so well in this. However overall, it is a very good poem )
whisperedcares chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I like this! The way you bold certaint words draws the reader's interest, and makes the poem more powerful, gives it more feeling. See, I told you, you are your own worst critic. This is fantastic!

~Your Reader,

~~Cara