Reviews for Tamer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Damn. NOT GOOD! I like Nico...lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking like this. And My name is Bridgett. Bo 'e' at the end though. Hehe cant wait to read on 1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, shucks. Poor Bridgette. :(( Just one thing, though. I really don't understand why she had to... slap Declan. Really. It seems kinda childish... or is that just a part of her character? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of a Night Market. It's really interesting. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so her family's alive? :)) Bridgette must be seriously confused... I wouldn't blame her, hahaha. Good job on this chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I only had one problem with this chapter. Although I understand that Bridgette isn't exactly normal, I saw hardly any pain at the passing of her dad. I mean, yes, there was a bit when she saw the house, but I'd think that a girl would mourn more over her dead family members. Just a little advice. :-) it just kinda seems unrealistic, though the rest of the chapter was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Bridget... :(( this is certainly getting interesting. :-D Will read on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, that last part was hilarious! :)) :)) This is very well-written, and I'm glad I came across it. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly an intense ending. It was a well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. It was an interesting chapter, with the display of bias from the knights and on the knights. And the ending was certainly intense, her being caught in the fire. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! What's gonna happen? Who's savin her? And why is Declan such an ass? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe. she should have fun with nico! make someone else *cough cough duncan* jealous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well those past two chapters were well written ones. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors and they were interesting. I like the way you have the plot moving along, you introduce lots of details you can work with more later without losing the main focus of the story. I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the great writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw...meanie |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOUR A VERY GOOD AUTHOR. opps cap locks on epp! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rene is awesome |