Reviews for Love
diwu6398 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
i love the narration of this piece. i admit, i looked at it because, um, it's called love. and it was not really what i was expecting.

i love how you sort of compare love to a "big word."

i sort of do the same thing. i say something without really knowing what i'm saying, but i know that i've used it correctly. only difference is that i look it up. because i have a pocket dictionary with me like all the time.

but when it comes to love... one thing comes to mind. but unlike you, i can't bring myself to say those three words.

the ending was just perfect. really.

favorite line: 'i know the circumstances and the emotion where the word "love" would be appropriate.'

this is love.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
i really do like this. a lot.

especially the indifferent, clinical tone of most of it.

how you're simply just stating the facts,

rather than divulging into deep feelings or emotions, as most love poems do.

so all in all, splendid. :)
the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
It's been a while since you posted. This reminds me of a conversation we may have had before, about love and it's nature and definition. Good stuff.. simple, sincere, almost more like an essay or proposal, but I like how it's deep yet maintains clarity.
Meow X3 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Honesty is the best policy ... most times... _; And this honesty was sweet.