Reviews for The Hurt of Pain
Ivriniel chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Beautiful poem. I like the message taht you convey in it.
frostany chapter 1 . 11/17/2004
wow! Really powerful, and hard hitting. It seems to me that in this poem you did an awesome job using words. This is a poem that really makes me think. I also have trouble with hurting myself, so I cna relate.
Dragen Eyez chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Right on the money, as usual. Your repition really drives your point home.. I also love the slightly abstract feel of this.. it's not blunt or overbearing.. it's almost like that whisper that tells me "no" and "this is why you shouldn't do this"..
Unheard-Screams chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
I like this. it shows that no matter what you do, you will still have pain. read my poems? they are about the same thing.
NoxOnexCares chapter 1 . 4/26/2004
Wow. That was so real to me I could have written it. I totally relate.
Ecka J Skittles chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
Wow..I really like it even though it's sad. Course I only read sad poems. I don't cut or anything, I have my own other issues though that give me the same feeling. It's amazing how well words express pain, but how hard they are to get out. Great poem.
AlleyKatGV chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
Wow, this is like exactly the opposite of what I write a lot of the time. But I still like it a lot and think it could really reach and help people.
D'Bryn chapter 1 . 11/5/2003
This is really good. I'm a burner, and I feel the same way a lot of the time. Keep the faith and hang in there.
hazelskyz chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
I love this poem so much. I am a cutter, and this poem expresses exactly how I feel about my cutting. Thank you for writing this poem- it really touched me.
HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect chapter 1 . 7/15/2003
wow. this is definitely good stuff. by the way, I'm the person who didnt sign in for the review of "goodbye"...theres prob more than one but oh well. i wanted you to know this review came from me. . I feel for ya, girl! and keep writing-all of your stuff is expressive and beautiful!
Silent Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/10/2002
wow. this is depressing and in a way i like it. it's very good.
Lauren chapter 1 . 2/7/2002 summed up everything I feel every single day...I had no idea other people felt like me when they cut...cutting is great..I will never give it up...However much I want to...
JenCarpeDiem chapter 1 . 6/22/2001
That's really, really good. I love it.
CM chapter 1 . 5/14/2001
...Whoa. That's almost exactly what I've been feeling. It's really hard to talk to people, because one doesn't know how they'll react or what they'll think. And sometimes they think a person is being self-piteous...*cringes*

I don't mutilate myself, but I've been thinking about it (I'm too much of a coward). "Words can't explain how trapped you'll be," is making me re-think the whole thing.
Black Angell chapter 1 . 5/13/2001
Wow. you just spoke exactly what ive been feeling. but sometimes, its coz you want people to see that you hurt. to know that your in pain. and sometimes you can't find the words to explain it, and when you try, they dont understand. That is an awesome poem.
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