Wow! Charlie is dense! Lol.

Really great chapter. I love how Adeline meets Charlie. The banter between them is very funny and sweet. I hope they end up together somehow. Please update soon! :)

Kudos for originality and beautiful wordplay.

Trying to understand a woman through her most treasured novel is wildly sad and inventive, a good phrase to explain this story. I've picked my favorite sentences and hope to find more as this thing unravels.

Keep up the good work. You're doing a wonderful job. I look forward to reading more. :)

You updated! :) I'm really loving Lily. I'm really excited to see where this story goes.

I love your writing style. It's not too elaborate, yet concise and sweet. Please continue! :]