| Reviews for O tempora! O mores! |
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   lilypad82 chapter 1 . 10/20/2010 ohh I like this story! Great description and I just love the room in the attic with the chandiler. Sounds like a great story! keep it up! |
| Cynthia Brent chapter 6 . 10/16/2010 Great chapter! I loved the humor of the descriptions, like the long deceased carrot. Also the way all these characters are special, funny people, not just Elspeth. And most of all I like the real deep feeling of the characters, like when the lady yells that she is forty years old and has never been kissed. I cannot believe someone as young as you has such a deep feeling for older people. Keep up the good work, you are an amazing writer! |
| Cynthia Brent chapter 4 . 10/1/2010 I like it a lot! Especially the bit about sliding down the bannister. |
| Cynthia Brent chapter 3 . 9/19/2010 Great having you back! I really liked this story, though again, with so many Misses and nobles and other people around it's hard to get a handle on the main characters sometimes. Does Elsie actually like Eddy? I can see why the family is so taken with her - she's so alive - but what does she like about them other than the fact that they are royals? Look forward to reading more! |
| everso chapter 2 . 6/20/2010 LOVE THIS! i cant wait to read more! please update more soon, i really like how this is turning out... i just dont understand the joke- explanation please? thanks! i just have one suggestion... can you make a family tree or a list with who and what everyone is? its a TAD confusing... example: Edward (Eddy)- Prince of Whales, son of ... and... that way i can understand it better! thanks! cant wait for your next update! |
| Cynthia Brent chapter 2 . 6/14/2010 Wow! I've never read anything like this before. What really impressed me was how Elspeth is such a real person. There's something so open and spacious and fresh about her personality that you can actually believe she would walk into a room full of royals and just sort of take to them right away. Her personality is so real and so powerful. The only suggestion I would make is to remember that sentences can be more powerful when you break up one very long one into two or three short ones. Take some extra time to read it over before you post and you'll find many places to try this out. Fantastic job - can't wait to read more! |