BWAHAHAHAHA! i love this!

And it has that serious tone of the twilight books!

i like how the name is belly!

This is absolute hilarity! I was reading this last night and laughing out loud to myself so much that my boyfriend had to ask me what on earth I was laughing at, so I started reading it out to him and he thought it was hilarious too!

I love the way you use totally inappropriate words in your sentences like "I rolled my eyes violently" and "I walked into the room dramatically" It just creates such hilarious images in your head of these characters who are usually portrayed so seriously.

I also love the attitude you've given Belly - it's exactly the type of energy you want to kick into the real-life (so to speak!)characters!

Brilliant piece of comedy, I love your style of writing - Really well done and thanks for making me laugh! :)

Freakin' hilarious! XD

OMG! That had me rolling on the floor laughing! I LOVED it! I REALLY cant wait for more!