Update asap!

wat the fuck i knew it ass hole plz tell me she gonna find out bout Ty nd wat the hell shes falling in love wiv the wrong person NO! thanks XD 4 updating update soon :)

umm there was one mistake i think in there the name ofher cat is pedro ..that what i read in the earlier chapter

other than that i was hooked from the moment i read it (i read 19 chapters back to back )

waitin for an update!

Wow...very realistic, very well-written, the only mistakes I can see so far are a few grammar errors, but very few and nothing that makes it difficult to read. I look forward to seeing more.

Wow I REALLY like your story! You're making me regret having started it so late, I really have to get to bed but here is my comment for you based on what I've read so far, which isn't much so it may be premature;

I LOVE your story, however I can't really see it as a published book, your descriptions are VERY distinct, so much so that I'd rather watch it than read it, I can see this as a TV show or movie. It's very very good, you're doing a GREAT job and I can't wait to rush my husband off to school so I can read some more...and that's saying a LOT because I don't get much time with him anymore ;) I'll be back in a few days to read more, again good job!

Nice chapter, I love it! I love the way you described his body language as his confidence failed him, that was beautiful!

Keep it up, I'm on to chapter three and then I think I'll be done for tonight, I'll be back soon though, I'm hooked!

oh I loved the kissing scene that was great! I can't believe her parents are dead! :( :( :( I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to review your story, I know I told you in the blog i'd get to it soon but I'll be honest I did forget I'd told you I would review, I'm hooked now though, I'm adding it to my favorites and I'll catch up here in a few days, my husband has the next couple days off and days off for him are few and far between now :-(

Great Prologue I can't wait to get to the next chapter! _

THIS IS SO GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Love the story!

Keep up the good work; i can't wait for more!

~Abby

Ahh man she doesn't remember all the illegals coming over the border? That sucks. I hope everything stayed on her camera. I enjoyed her seeing her dad and I hope that she really starts opening up...preferable to Miguel because he's sexy!

More please...and Wayward asap hehe

this actually gave me friggin' goosebumps when i realized that she was on the brink of walking towards the bright light! too bad victoria won't fall for miguel. he's a great guy and its sad to see his heart break :( but i bet its going to happen hahahhaha. maybe hell realize that the woman before is the one for him! and as for the forgetting of the perverse scene that lance had constructed...:S but im a little confused as to whether miguel was watching as well, shouldn't he know about what happened? i hope that the memory card of the camera can be restored!

ps. i forgot to mention that you add the perfect amount of humour in this. keep up the great work! and update soon! :D

HOLY SHIT! but at the same time, this is so invigoratingly fantastic. one more chapter left :( im so glad that was out before, otherwise i would have to deal with this nasty cliffhanger ;)

IM SERIOUSLY HOPING THAT SHE HAS A BLACK BELT IN JUJITSU, MUY TAI AND SOME OTHER IMPRESSIVE MARTIAL ARTS!

At the beginning, i suspected senartor riggins to be a bad man involved with some shady business, but now that i think about it, i think it's lance harwood doing all the dirty work. Shady little bastard ;) but something made me think that the senator's wife was involved in the shady business, but she seems like a really nice and pure woman :( confused, but happy that im confused...if that makes any sense ;) ill keep reading!

Wow. I don't think there's another way to put this, but this is a beautiful chapter :) keep up the amazing work! im going to keep on reading!