Great chapter! I was so scared that she would be captured and killed, but nope! Delgado saves the day!

lucky they wasn't kidnapped i thought that was going 2 happen any gd 2 c nothing like that happened PS i wonder if she will let sum1 in her heart? hop so nd if we r lucky it could be ... no it should be Delgado no matter wat i wonder if any thing will happen between them? if yes make it soon its killing me seeing Ty getting every thing its just not fair when hes competley lying 2 her update soon XD

Wow! Great story and mystery in the story... you've got me hooked! :)

I have to say, this is one of the best stories i've read on fictionpress! this is gonna sound dumb, but it's like im reading a real book. Vic is great. I love badass women, but it also want her and Miguel to hook up. AND this is a hella good mystery cuz im fucking confused but not TOO confused. Confused in a good way.

Anyways, i think this is the longest review i've ever given, haha XD

I want to read MORE!

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What a Cliffhanger, Im only new to this story and i have to say it is one of my favorites already. I love the Characters and cant wait for more.

i've so far loved your story, only if i'm on chapter 2. i do hope the chapters are longer the longer i go, but i was wondering what nationally victoria is? because you said her looks were dark, just wondering! :)

cliffhanger, no! thanks for the update

Illegal immigrants? Woah...definitely wasn't expecting that one. I'm curious to see where this is all leading. And I can't believe she got caught. It must be the fogginess from the concussion that put her out of her game. She really should go to a doctor or lay low. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!

who hit her ? nd where is Miguel? when u ned him i hope he ain't cought i agree this chapter was very short well i cnt wait 2 find out more bout this who hit her nd y r they carrying illegal immigrants ? nd who did she get cought by? all these question i cnt wait 4 more update XD

Great chapter! I absolutely love it and can't wait for more! I hope Miguel saves her!

This story is amazing,

I hope that Ty isnt a bad guy,

if he is ,

ill cry D:

Vickie, i can feel her b-wordy energy radiating from her(:

but shes nice so alls good .

:D

Miguel, hope you do aight & get over Vickie.

:)

I hope he doesn't turn into an arsehole (Ty). I really liked him until now, but you have me doubting him.

I hope he is not working for Lance. I hope he is working in partnership with his brother and his brother is in hiding because he discovered something because he is a reporter or something.

I don't know. Just a theory. I love your writing style and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next update.

cannot wait for the next update!

he's a fucking lying bastered i hope she wasn't fooled by that i sware 2 god if she was ... u can clearly c that he's lying / hiding sumfink so now we know his brother wasn't kidnapped and he's doing a job what some1 told him 2 do this get better if vic doesn't kick his gd 4 nothing ass i will i can wait 4 more updates so update :)

Nice chapter