I don't normally read or review stories, because well, reading them takes away from time that could be used writing them. Anywho. Cheat sheet version, I read yours.

And it's good. It's definitely a LOT better than most of the stories on here.

Have you ever read Sarah Dessen's books? She does the same thing you're doing with Erin, mixing characters. It's awesome when pulled off right, and you've got it. I haven't read Erin's story, but I think I will.

Also, I live in Corpus, and have friends going to UT at Austin and UTSA, but not Dallas. I'm more of a TAMU girl, but that's beside the point. If you're not from Texas, good job at pinning the traffic. If you are, well, good job at using your resources. It's fun.

Keep it up (:

-cp.

good start

wow intense but she is so smart !

thanx!