Reviews for When We Became Me
Mirabella Nevaeh chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I really like how this poem expresses the feeling of loneliness that goes along with a friend moving on when you're not ready. An oh how I know the feeling :) But the one-word lines are really interesting. It kind of gives it a choppy, distanced effect that works with what you're trying to portray. Nice poem, keep writing!