That was such a beautiful story. You described her so well and made her so vivid. And this story teaches such a huge lesson: not to say goodbye to something that you don't want gone. It's such a tragic story too, but I guess that just makes it stronger.

amazing :)

You're description of the girl was so great. You're truly talented :D

Aw, I love the last line.

It's so bittersweet.

Your description of her was absolutely wonderful.

The perfect balance of pretty and personality.

Good job (: Very sweet.