|Reviews for Flames to Dust|
| Aida Rose chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
You had good written, to me, except for the last two lines of the first verse. The rhyme seem kind of forced and awkward there, which disturbed your established flow. Although, you did fix that, in my opinion, in the last two verses.
I like how you make a clear point without actually going out and saying it until the last two lines.
| shk chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
this is awesome...i loved it