Great story! I love how fascinating you've made each element, I can't choose a favorite... Now I can't help but wonder which element Tom will choose :) Nice combo between humor, seriousness and complete and total awesomeness I love your descriptions of the different modes of transportation, very amusing. The element masters you've introduced were fascinating, I look forward to the remaining ones! So please update soon!

Athena

Good chapter, I can't wait to read the next one!

Good plot twist with Sasuvan.

I wonder which element Tom will be best at?

I like how you crafted Tom to be the quiet, loner type. It seems like he has good reason to keep his secret, for now his family thinks he is some sort of witch.

Good stuff!

Wow... this is definitely something I'll be writing.

I really liked your first chapter. So, Bravo. I'm going to R&R the rest of your chapters, but if they're as good as chapter 1, my reviews will all be praise.

Feel free to R&R my own story, The Rise of Inferno.

This story is really well written, it deserves more traffic than this. Anyway, the story was really good, it could've used some stronger detail in some places (to add magnitude to the plot points) and the single chapter should be broken down into a more managable size over the span of several other chapters (the sheer length of the first chapter is probably scaring away potential readers).

Aside from that, I'm glad I dropped in on this. You do a good job fleshing Tom out and your scene description is great. Great fic overall; if you'd like, I can add it to my C2 and see if I can draw in more traffic.