Reviews for Stuck
FierceOcelot chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
This is, for lack of better words on my part, awesome. The dialog was very cohesive, not to mention humorous. And the end surprised me! I like stories with a little twist in them. All in all, the story came together very well and kept me hooked to the end.
Content In The Chaos chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Interesting story, I am slightly confused to why Frank didn't admit or make clear he was conspiring with Matilda once they were in the vault. Since they were planning on shooting the hostages at that point anyway. But I like your style of writing and your story. Well done
MomijiLuver5 chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Uhh, I don't mean to sound stupid, but what the heck happened in the end? I was really confused. Was Frank apart of the hostage thing. Because, like, I thought he was a cop, then... good story. Well written.

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