|Reviews for silence|
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I liked this because it was seriously creepy, and it managed to mix that creepiness with love in a way that made my spine crawl. I think your writing would benefit from a little more imagery because everything said in this poem was plainly put and some more description would be interesting.
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| mr mahler chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
heart in your mouth poem,realy liking your lines like...''her silence says more,
he says, than any of her words,''
can really relate at the moment with...''anything he says has become
unanswerable, she can't say a word
for fear she'll say something wrong
something to hurt him
or something to break her'' i admire your approach and hard felt gutsey style...