Reviews for Sugarless Lemonade
Turquoise Mage chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Good start i'm curious to see what happens next and what happened to Luke that he had his backpack and what the fight was over.
Smoogle chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Lovely begining :) Can't wait for more.
JungleMan chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
This seems rather interesting... I'm excited to see what happens next!
Fadded chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
It was good. I liked it. The beginning you had going there, really brought me in. I wanted to know what happened to set everything off XD. I do have to say that when you took it back a few months prior with the class, I was like "Oh no, not another school story", but it is actually pretty good. I am glad you didn't seat Alex next to Luke XD. I can't wait to read the next chapter and please stay away from huge cliches, or it will turn your story into a whole different direction. Update when you can!
Ayumi chapter 1 . 6/11/2010

Awesome! Its really good!
fullofsunshine chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
This is an AWESOME start! It seems like it's gonna become a big hit on FP :) I really like it! Hope you update soon :)
Esquirella chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Cool start!