Reviews for Alkaia and the Pack
Ash-Rulz chapter 3 . 3/23/2011
plz continue
Love2read765 chapter 3 . 7/11/2010
Lovely chapter(: I like it. Again just watch your grammar. Also ""So," said Shelly. "What do you think of Oxville?" Shelly asked me." You don't need to say Shelly asked me after the question, it confuses the reader. Also it is implied she asked by the question mark. (: Also maybe use other words then "I said, I asked, she said, she asked, etc." because it bores the reader. Keep writing (: Can't wait for the next chapter(:
Da-zGreen chapter 3 . 7/9/2010
This story is interesting. I would like to read more. Please update soon!
cookiewolf chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I like it) damien seems coolP update soonD
Love2read765 chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
Very well done. I adore your writing style(: Just remeber to check for grammer errors and when you do "I this, I that" it stops the flow of the story. Keep up the good work(:

-Love2read765
cookiewolf chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
woah i liek itD so far. shes a awesome siren haha i wish i could fly lmfao xD
Bridgett-blah chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I really like this first chapter, please keep writing them!
Love2read765 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Very well done (: One thing just reread before you post, there were a few grammer mistakes. But I really enjoyed reading it and I am excited to read more. (: Keep up the good work(:

-Love2read765