|Reviews for Cielo|
| CuriousContradiction chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Cielo's a beautiful word. I've always thought that sky needed a different sound to describe it, and I think cielo's a better substitution for its English counterpart.
To me, this was an interesting poem. You have a lot of wonderful, beautiful lines. One thing I think you can change is to use punctuation to create flow (pauses through periods, flow through commas, etc.). Like the other reviewer, I especially liked the last line. (:
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
"THe only sound is a sigh" I like how you concluded with this, nice work.