Reviews for A Child's Mind
Jewelz125 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I think you did a great job. I liked the whole story pretty much.
Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
I have to give you credit for having an original idea-telling a story from a baby's point of view. And you did it pretty well. The little girl had an adult vocabulary, but her way of thinking was consistent with an infant's mind. You made her seem very cute and cuddly.