Reviews for intertwined hearts
Penelope Wendy Bing chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
There was one point where you mentioned Kristen, in Alice's journal entry.

It's a little hard to keep the characters straight at this point, but it's still interesting.

-P.W. Bing
Penelope Wendy Bing chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Hi Merc-la! I think this is really more of a prologue chapter, and I make a point of NEVER judging a story by its prologue. They can be hugely misleading. I'm going to keep reading, though.

-P.W. Bing