|Reviews for there's a lack of color here|
| Lady Riss chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I liked it. :)
The red descriptions were amazing, and I liked the last stanza a lot too. :)
| Thenardier chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
I loved this. I love the cryptic tone present here, the fascinating choice of words here. But most importantly, I love the images that you are able to conjure up. Beautifully written.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
There's a lot of childish wonder and vibe here, which I really liked, andingled with the sexualized undercurrents made the piece very vibrant for me.