|Reviews for Question of damages|
| Punslinger chapter 4 . 6/15/2010
I'm frustrated, too. Your opening haiku got off to a good start. The second chapter's verse carried on impressively. "I won't be a midwife to your death." is a gripping line. Then the flame sputtered out. I hope you'll be able to relight it.
| Robert Orville Berkshire chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
I quite like this, particularly the last line.
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
The angst is well explessed here, and rhyming "perplexed" with "next" is an unexpected pleasure. Your haikus grow in depth as your wordsmithing improves.