Reviews for Monster |
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![]() ![]() I have been following this story for awhile. I completely understand the updating distances, I have trouble with keeping up too. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh no that's so terrible that he hit her! I really love your story, it's very well crafted and the plot is creative. I feel so badly for both of them, although at the end Carson lost some sympathy. I wish he was smart enough not to listen to Jack but I know that's all the society he's really had. You had a couple of issues with accept and except but those were the only grammatical errors I really saw. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I probably already said this... But I'm in love with this story. I love it so much... It's one of my favorites. Its so awesome! Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that was amazing, i just wanted to say i started reading this story yes and already finished it today. i luuv ur story its been a while since i read a good story like this and i really hope u update fast and carson i like him but i cant beleive he hit her - how cud he i hope its not how hes going to react every time something happens:( poor hannah she already went through so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, what an intense update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg i freaking love this story! Please update soon because its so awesome. I loved it so much! |
![]() ![]() i just started reading this and it's great. but I'm like literally beating my self up because you left it right there! -Abby xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. Please updatesoon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no he didn't! I was going to say how sweet he was but after reading the last part, I hope he goes through hell to get her back! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UGHHH i cant wait for the next chapter! How can you leave us with this cliffhanger! lol good chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOOOOOO CARSONNNNNNNN, I DONT WANT TO HATE HIM |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story loved every chapter can't wait till you update. |
![]() ![]() OH NO! Hannah cannot meet Jack! dsjaklnkjwljdshakjn You absolutely HAVE to update soon... Keep up the great work! Carson is adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Please continue writing, you were one of the people who inspired me to begin writing, keep up the good work! xoxo-Frenchie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! It is very unique and I am glad to see that you update. |