Reviews for the end the end the end
GirlWithTheBrokenSmile chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
A little jumbled, but that makes it interesting:]

Good job!
Kt of the Bugs chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
...I'm speechless...

That was really touching, the life ending one hit me the hardest, I have tears in my eyes at the moment!

You certainly have a way with words, this is a really

beautiful poem!

I'll be remembering it for a while, that's for sure.

Good job!