Reviews for Tempest
Justin Carlton chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Nice writing. Good imagery and very stable use of flashback/flashforward. Somewhat of a predictable ending, but decidedly suitable for the overall theme.

Good work!
walkonair chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Well, darn it. Something weird happened, and it looks like my review was only an 'I'. But, I pinky-swear that I wrote a long review. Oops.

I really liked this story, especially how he died at the end. Because, in my mind, he's going to Heaven, and he's going to be praised, because he did the right thing and is completely innocent.

Anyway... I'm mad at FictionPress for snipping out 98% of my review. :p
walkonair chapter 1 . 6/14/2010