Reviews for J B,
perhaps then you'd notice me chapter 12 . 7/15/2010
gah i love this story. i just thought i'd send a little review because i know i love hearing if people like things, and after reading this for...oh a while, i figure i should at least mention that i like it.. ergo, a review.

:D

i love how this is just so honest. if it's not autobiographical, it sounds it, which is really good. keep writing it, please, because i'm hooked :D

have a happy day!

.sharpie
Little girl Big world chapter 6 . 7/2/2010
Wow 3:30 in the morning and you passed all your finals, that's impressive
Little girl Big world chapter 5 . 7/2/2010
I like how you tell this story.

The suspense keeps me reading
Little girl Big world chapter 4 . 7/2/2010
"It really bothered me that your extremely good looks were wasted on such a nasty personality." Amazing line. I'm really liking this story. Your stories are always so interesting
Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
Aw yes, oh so innocent.

Nice loophole haha
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
Hah I love the last line.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Sounds like this is going to be an interesting story.
rippling iris chapter 3 . 6/16/2010
this story makes me anxious. i don't know if this is biographical (most of your stuff is so i'm assuming this is too). be careful. be careful.

this is just me projecting a bad experience on you. it's very well written... /
crocodile chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
i really enjoy this confessional style. there is something so wildly intimate but so understandable in this piece. you use the perfect amount/variety of detail so that i can fully worm myself into the experience without feeling bludgeoned by images. such a nice, flowing style.