|Reviews for fantasy|
| Mirabella Nevaeh chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Very nice poem. It has a good rhythm to it, which some free verse poems do not. It really portrays war in a solemn, "tells it like it is in all its horror" way, which kind of contradicts the classic war story. The rhetorical questions also added a lot, such as the defining last line, "Surely fantasy is better than this?" Maybe, for future reference, you may want to try separating your poems into stanzas, as they might be easier to read that way. Good job, keep writing!