I like the one shot.,it was hot xD

Woot! Cute and sexy! AWESOME! Haha I love it! I'm English by the way, southerner actually. Haha westerner as well, haha anywho I saw no mistakes so twas brill. :)

it's cute.

and yeah i know gypsy coz my favorite athlete (Rafa Nadal) is in that video

THAT WAS SO FUCKING AWESOME I LAUGH AND DREAM AND EVERYTHING! GAMMIT MY BFF IS AN ONLY CHILD :( I WANT THISS TO

PS: IM FROM PUERTO RICO!

Love it!:)

Aww. Cute :). Romance novels tend to do that though. Lol!

I could be totally wrong, but was the movie reference Sixteen Candles? The "hot-stuff" comment makes me think of that.

And, by the way. I'm from the US. Minnesota to be exact.

Hot damn! Hahaha, I've always wanted to say that. Anyway, this was adorable ]

Heya. (-:

This was really cute, sexy, almost? But very, very awesome nonetheless. (-:

I'm Australian, btw. (-;

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I'm heading to your page to read more of your awesome stories.

Oh and I'm from yhe U.K :)

I spotted one mistake:

"But you were also looking at me like you were about to orgasm, so I figured I had a good change that you liked me back."

I think you meant 'chance'. Anyway, I liked this one-shot. I could immediately get involved in it and I like Dee. She's so funny when she blurts stuff out - kinda like me :)

So, Marco is her best friend's little brother? Hm. A twist from the best friend's older brother cliche, lol.

Hahhaha[x

I LOVE!

This was an amazing read :P :D

you must write more!

I honestly didn't know what to expect when I read the title, but I must commend you on how wonderful it was to read this! Your humor is excellent and keeps me laughing the entire way. I just sort of love how this is written, and their playful dialogue is quite amusing as well.

Instant fave! ;D

~Netty-chan214