Reviews for Not Enough Time
KD Rye chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
This story did a good job at putting life in perspective. No matter how wealthy and successful you are in one moment you can lose everything. There are a few grammar and tense mistakes so a good edit would benefit this piece. Otherwise nice job.
supernatural freak chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I don't know what really to review. All I can say is, if you meant it as a shock story, you succeeded. I wanted more. :(
disinterested Youth chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Really great oneshot nicely full of emotion, glad to see you back writing!
justagirl chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Hot damn, that was depressing!
Grim-Reaper21 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Your name suits you well. That was very sneekie. I was expecting it to end with them having a child not with Jen dying. I was very upset but it was a good story. I feel bad for Kylie though I would hate to have to be in that kind of situation.
Lover of good fiction chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
How could you do that? How could you stop it there? how could you make it start off so delightful onto to end it in that way. You are cruel and sadistic. I was expecting you to write chapters about their love, instead you stopped it dead. Their characters deserved more development, more depth to this story. They deserved more, we your readers deserved more.


very, very disappointed reader