Reviews for The Haunting
marshmallow7 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
hot pancakes, you are good. this style of writing always makes me feel the most and makes me...i don't know, but a feeling wells up that is completely overwhelming. thank you
mmmistake chapter 13 . 11/23/2010
This may be one of the best stories I've ever read. Well, no, it definitely is.

It's written so beautifully and the way it reads is delightful. The words are gorgeous and all mend together intricately like manufactured cloth. And the story itself- the plot- is delicate and messy in all the right ways. I am absolutely in love with this story.
BlAcKMaCgICWoMeN chapter 13 . 11/22/2010
i read this story and i cried it captures everything...
rhythm within chapter 13 . 11/17/2010
That was probably one of the most beautiful pieces of prose I've ever read. I am so glad I DID read it. I'm almost in tears it was so good. Thank you for posting this and sharing it with us.
Tinted Windows chapter 13 . 11/2/2010
Wow. Amazing, simply amazing. Brilliant and interesting style of writting, the end was perfect, wow... hehe well i really enjoyed reading that the poem, snipit little story or watever that Thom wrote is stuck in mi head now... brilliant :) x
PyroTech chapter 13 . 10/27/2010
I was worried this was going to have a sad ending! I love this!
PyroTech chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
I was worried about the whole story being written like this, but I looked ahead a bit and it isn't. This seems very good I'm gunna continue reading XD
The Sham chapter 11 . 10/16/2010
Oh man. Is that the end? I was hoping for a happy ending. This nearly made me cry.
The Sham chapter 10 . 10/16/2010
Loved the emotional weight of this chapter.
The Sham chapter 9 . 10/16/2010
I never really liked this Michael kid.
The Sham chapter 7 . 10/16/2010
This is probably my favorite chapter so far. The characters are developing so nicely. Love love love it.
The Sham chapter 5 . 10/16/2010
:( Tragic silences.
The Sham chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
Still loving it. Not much else to say, but I think that's a good thing.
The Sham chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
I was too intent on getting to the next chapter and forgot to review Chapter 2. I really love how you've written this. I've always had a passion for the more abstract characters in literature, and both Noah and the narrator seem to be in that category. Still excited to see where this is going :)
The Sham chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I usually don't review each story I read a chapter at a time. But this one has piqued my interest, both with content and writing skill. I'm excited to see where this goes.
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