Reviews for i am male,
Doxie Doll chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Mhmm. Delicious
i am female chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
bloody brilient. this story is true for me, just with the opposite gender...hurts like a bitch. ~you're beautiful, when you sleep~ my favorite part.
Middy-The-Kitty chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
I like this, the theme is over all very nice. However, don't forget basic grammar. Capitalize your I's, capitals at the beginning of sentences, and you might want to break up a few of your sentences so that they're not run-ons.

But hey, aside from the grammar, this story was a pleasant read for me. :3 Bravo!
nevermore199 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
This is really awesome. I love it. And I'm sure it's a true story to someone.
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I like this. I like how to the point this is. Some really nice descriptions.

you're beautiful, when you sleep.- I like this. Simple and real.

True story, maybe? Hm.

Nice work(:
in the city of neon and chrome chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
this i like. i can relate to it exactly. favorite part: "you're beautiful, when you sleep."