Reviews for It Goes on Beating
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I love how you change the structure here - it's like the structure mirrors the description of a damaged engine... Slowly but surely coasting to a stop. Well done :)
Kader Gwyneth Marque chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
I especially like this one. It has a strong heaviness and struggling feeling when I hear of the gears crunching against each other. It's a great metaphor for how someone feels after their heart's been broken.


Sahara Mist chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
So true. Even if your heart breaks it isn't the end. It does really continue to splinter and splinter some more. I wish it wouldn't, but based on experience your poem is so very true.