|Reviews for I Am Winter|
| Belladonna Snow chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
wow, very bold and I have to say your ryhmeing is *perfect*. thats one thing that many people, myself fully included, have trouble with. But you seem to pull it out of a hat with no trouble at all. Interesting peice here, I hope to see more of your work.
| pretty twisted chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Hey look, religion!
"But I know that sin feels much, much better." - I really liked your use of "feels" instead of something like "is." Makes it mean just that much more.
I don't know if it's a good thing or bad (probably good), but I didn't notice the rhymes much until I re-read the poem. I mean, I didn't notice because it just flowed so nicely, I didn't even pause to register the sounds. Except in the first stanza, for some reason. "Near," and "hear." Oh, speaking of which, I adored your addition of ", you hear?" to the end of the fourth line! It's kind of like an indignant, "got it?" And the soul scattered in the wind-gorgeous. Love love love.