Reviews for The Dark Of Night
Kara P chapter 59 . 7/13/2011
Oh my gosh! I was so surprised that this story was updated! Yay! Great chapter! :)
Naephrowyn chapter 59 . 7/9/2011
Hello Bryant!

It's so good to see your story updated again, I've missed your writing. I was beginning to think you weren't coming back to finish your stories D: This almost-ending chapter was very well written!

Such a tragedy...I'm anxious to see how you wrap up the story :D
oober chapter 59 . 7/8/2011
Poor Raevid and Banth that was so sad to see them cry. i am eager to see what the next update will bring for Giselle. Love the story :)
ooberstein chapter 58 . 7/2/2011
Amazing! I am so glad you updated :) I just love how Banth protects Giselle its so cute. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Kara P chapter 57 . 3/22/2011
Amazing Story! I love it! :)
thenighting-gale chapter 57 . 3/21/2011
Unbelievably fantastic! I've just read from start to the current chapter and I'm in love
Naephrowyn chapter 57 . 3/20/2011
finally.. the fight!

looking forward to seeing how this part of the story wraps up

I can imagine the details pretty clearly :)

keep up the writing!
Naephrowyn chapter 56 . 2/15/2011
Oh my... you haven't updated in a while D:

I hope everything's going alright. Please update!
SEGA chapter 55 . 1/13/2011
Shouldn't this be published at fanfiction? I mean, the drow, the finger talking, the driders, Ithilids, Lloth, the language and especially underdark are NOT your original ideas. The plot and most of the characters are but the world? No. Not yours. Also, it irks me that you write 'woman' as 'womyn'. It really isn't necessary.
Vivi-Annie chapter 55 . 1/7/2011
Gah, all this xcitement is making me crazy. I'm looking forward to your next chapter, grat job.

Vivi-Annie }-
HowlingWolf chapter 55 . 1/7/2011
Good chapter.
Naephrowyn chapter 54 . 1/2/2011
Anticipation & tensionn DX Don't have us wait to long, the exciting part is coming!
Naephrowyn chapter 53 . 12/15/2010
Yea, pretty bad timing to be pregnant D:

This chapter was intense, and really gruesome. Your imagination is pretty awesome, it surprises me. Like all the dark things that the drowesses did to these refugees, never would have imagined those situations myself. Of course, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D Thanks for keeping up with the updates!
YourCritic chapter 33 . 12/13/2010
"I could hug you?" That's seriously all she has to say about nearly being raped? Seriously? What a girly girly, completely and absolutely useless thing to say, not to mention it removes any sense of reality from her situation/your story.

Ok, very interesting concept. But. Not enough description or character development. There's also pretty much no background history for the entire world the reader is supposed to be in, which makes it hard to imagine. I like the finger-language though, nice idea and pretty good execution.

But, mithril? You're honestly trying to get away with that?

In addition, maybe we should be introduced to her healing powers BEFORE she gets taken to the wirds strange world. Then it wouldn't seem quite so strange.

AND, she has these awesome fighting skills...oh wait. She says she doesn't but she's killing all these drows. Mary-Sue moment much? How are they so terrifying if so many of them are utterly crap at fighting?

I also find it unutterably creepy that she's falling for someone that isn't even her own species. But, that's just me, so feel free to ignore that last bit.

But the rest, I really mean. Happy writing!
Naephrowyn chapter 51 . 12/7/2010
O_O so more of the past is revealed! And wow... so what if Giselle is fated to diee no Raevid's actions only result from him wanting to express himself before its too late when Giselle is gone.. at least that's what I think. It seems like many people want Giselle to sacrifice lots of things...

Good update! Thnxx
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