Reviews for Laws of Attraction
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
I love the idea of this, and it's very well-written. And definitely creative. It seems a bit prose-y to me, but I know I'm totally guilty of that myself, so I can't really comment too much on it. I really love the line, "We are not magnets drawn together/by the polarity of our genders." Not only is it true, but it's beautifully worded. Keep writing! :)
Lili Grey chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Hm. It's cute. I just finished a physics class so it was actually very entertaining. This would be good for people who don't think that poetry is fun or intellectual or whatever their reasons are. Most the time I like rhyming and reasons for the end of lines but this didn't bother me so much. It still had flow some how. Anyway, great job, very amusing and thoughtful.