|Reviews for Trap|
| Slaaty chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I can definitely relate.
One correction: "no matter the way the ocean pulses" does not make complete grammatical sense. No matter which way the ocean pulses would be much better. However, does it ruin the rhythm you were trying to create?
| in theory chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Serene. I misunderstand how the title connects? It's quite vague. I do enjoy vagueness but this is stretching comprehension and accessibility quite a lot.