Reviews for Queen Mab
nickyO chapter 9 . 7/15/2010
Again, *wow.
nickyO chapter 8 . 7/15/2010
You have such delicate, romantic word use. A clever analogy in this poem that begs for illustration. Great work.
Black Sparrow chapter 9 . 7/14/2010
Lovely.
Black Sparrow chapter 8 . 7/14/2010
Beautiful :)
nickyO chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
Astute description of what a dream is.
nickyO chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
"gilded" is a perfect word choice.
nickyO chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
I love this project of yours. This chapter is quite delicately creepy.
Black Sparrow chapter 7 . 6/29/2010
You have a lovely way with words. :)
Black Sparrow chapter 6 . 6/29/2010
Lovely, lovely! :)
Black Sparrow chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
Love the letter C :) The correct term for the repetition of a particular sound and the beginning of a word throughout a sentence escapes me at the present time, however I am positive my English teacher has mentioned it several times in the past...
Black Sparrow chapter 4 . 6/28/2010
Brilliant stuff! :)
JuniperRhose chapter 5 . 6/24/2010
An interesting concept and well written. I liked how each haiku related to the line, but also branched away. Well done.
Isca chapter 4 . 6/23/2010
"Whisperer on a [...] gilded finger." Umm, that's pretty much mind-blowing...
Isca chapter 3 . 6/21/2010
"A twisted shell of agate limbs." Marvelous. Agate limbs! I'm impressed.
Isca chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
"Mab pulls at wombs." Oh wow. I love the 'tugging' imagery here. Mab tubs at children, life, femininity, etc.
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