Woah. This is a really good story.

I noticed on your profile that you and your twin are writing this story together. So I'm giving you both credit when I say that this first chapter was very good, and I'm very pleased to add it to my alerts list.

It could do with a little tip though: I felt like the story jumped at you, after all, the very first chapter you guys tell about how the parents are murdered and that the twins manage to free this guy and are about to fight some guy from the High Council. It's just a little bit too fast paced, but no biggie.

Anyway, good job, keep writing, and feel free to check out and R&R (read and review) my fantasy epic, The Rise of Inferno.

Cheers :)