|Reviews for Unexpected Arsenic|
| Carl chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I like that the characters didn't have names apart from the daughter. It seemed to create special significance and focus on her where everything else was a bit nondescript.
The husband and wife could be any married couple, and that makes it interesting, since you could imagine them in any way you want.
Excellent story I thought, though a little more emotional connection with the protagonist would have been nice, although I think that would have needed it to be longer, and I actually like the length it is.
Keep it up.
| iShuckPotatoes chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
...! Wait so his wife KILLED HIM! Dang, that's harsh. Good story though. I enjoyed it.