|Reviews for The first felony|
| Mouse Penn chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
That was a good short story, but if you plan on turning it into a longer story or book, I think Brian should start with smaller felonies, like pickpocketing or shoplifting. Or he could be trusted, and be given the key to the house. Big houses like that usually have a security system. And just a note, you should capitalize the title. R&R one of mine?