there's a few small spelling errors, but all is forgiven when you've written something with such a gratifying twist as the ending. really quite enjoyable in the shock and awe of it all

beautiful emotion evoked in this poem

I absolutely LOVE this piece.

So beautiful and wonderfully crafted!

I love the formatting especially on transparent.

My favorite lines were, "i shattered through layer after

fragile layer

of the deepest memories."

This left such vivid images in my mind because of your brilliant word choice and descriptions.

Favorite :)

It has this exhilerating, haunting feel to it. What can I say? It was very well written :)

Very well written. Haunting.

beautiful. i've had that kind of dream.