Reviews for awakened
cab fed hig chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
there's a few small spelling errors, but all is forgiven when you've written something with such a gratifying twist as the ending. really quite enjoyable in the shock and awe of it all
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
beautiful emotion evoked in this poem
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
I absolutely LOVE this piece.

So beautiful and wonderfully crafted!

I love the formatting especially on transparent.

My favorite lines were, "i shattered through layer after

fragile layer

of the deepest memories."

This left such vivid images in my mind because of your brilliant word choice and descriptions.

Favorite :)
ephemelody chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
It has this exhilerating, haunting feel to it. What can I say? It was very well written :)
JuniperRhose chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
Very well written. Haunting.
themanicurist chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
beautiful. i've had that kind of dream.