|Reviews for Silence|
| Rocky Swordleaf chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
thats very good. i like how its about an author. i can really relate to this piece. there was only one thing i noticed, though: "over-used cliches" is kind of redundant. but the rest of it was great. keep up the good work. :)
| Archia chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
I think this is really good. I like the whole point of it and how it tends to happen to many people. I think this is a descriptive piece and well done. Just a few things- You've written 'he wanted to people to...' I don't think the first to is meant to be there. I think there was something else but I've forgotten but I may have been imagining it.