Reviews for Cursed Eyes
Iskeirka chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
I gave up after the first paragraph, quite frankly. The poor and force rhyming was getting on my nerves, along with the lack of grammar and punctuation. You really should have something like this set out in a format that's easy to read, like so:

Cursed eyes, that spawn the lies

That go to my head, and turn me to dread

etc. etc.

Two lines should work 'cause it seems like you just slapped two vaguely related lines together in a higgledy-piggledy way that carries on and makes no sense.

Also, veal? REALLY?
Lace-1812 chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
Did you out this one up to spite me? No more veal, it hurts my eyes!