WOW. I loved this it's so good pleaes write another part. it's great. pleaes do. i need to know what happens next.

It was a really cool creepy story. great job on it.

Kinda scared to go into the bathroom now 0.0

Just simply epic. the last part was my favorite though. when hatter says "Perfect."

p.s. Trying not to be mean or sound like a flamer but this is kind of something that should be on rather than fictionpress. sorry.

I like it. Madness, as is shown here, shows something completely different than the normal Alice story we've all been exposed to. This Alice is someone who was broken by the Hatter and the Hare, broken to become the Alice they knew. I don't know how you did this, I don't know what prompted this story, but I do enjoy it, and I hope you will write more things like this in the future. I love your writing style on this, and I hope you will write more soon.

~Beyond Birthday 1993

It certainly did have that crazy nut job feel to it. Pretty good, I'd say.