|Reviews for The Visitor|
| Vernoodle chapter 6 . 12/8/2014
Such a creepy but cool story so far :)
| P. K. Gallagher chapter 9 . 6/25/2013
You have a very unique, kind of minimalist writing style that I don't quite know what to make of. It's not very revelatory, so I find myself with a lot of questions both about the plot, setting, and even your protagonist. I don't really feel like I know her, or any of the characters really. This makes reading the story feel a little like flying blind, which can be a little uncomfortable and prevent my total immersion in the story. That said, the minimalism does help to generate taut suspense, and I'm definitely on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to happen next, so great job with that. All in all, I'm looking forward to updates and seeing where you take this.
| HiHelloMisterBear chapter 9 . 4/24/2012
I love it.
I like how she remembers it and then the next chapter or so it tells you what really happened.
| LostarielHarris chapter 9 . 6/5/2011
| violet.castle chapter 9 . 5/31/2011
Love the suspense your adding...but it keeps me hanging..:) But, I love it. It's great. More please! :)
| RBVR1234 chapter 9 . 4/22/2011
The suspense is killing me. Cliffhangers! I love this!
| neeecHole chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
This is absolute brilliance and entirely sheer genius. I literally felt my heart pumping. I wish you all the best. Update soon please :D
| One-Loving-Song chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
I've only read the first 5 chapters of your nook, and its really good. Though the chapters are really short up to chapter 5. Not really a big fan of short chapter. But its so far really good.
| midnightsweetheart chapter 9 . 8/13/2010
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but please update! This story just gets more and more intriguing. Her past shocked me- she seems kinda crazy! I can't wait to find out more and see what happens with the boy outside the window.
| Kyeire chapter 9 . 8/12/2010
AH! IT WAS AWESOME! WHAT'S NEXT?
| Lula9167 chapter 9 . 7/19/2010
It look like she is the one deserving to be dead. She is really crazy. Maybe the visitor is her own mind. Probably she will end up dead. Please update soon. (Like the chapter)
| capricorn095 chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
One more thing, you should give a background information on this so called "visitor."
| capricorn095 chapter 9 . 7/18/2010
Your story is confusing me and no offense but the flashbacks are getting kind of boring and I still don't understand why the guy is visiting her? and the most troubling question is what is he? I wanted to make another point too. The chapters are still short, make them longer. Trust me, this is the kind of story people'd kill to read. Your suspense is killing us all and at this rate you won't have any readers, seeing as we'll all be dead. Lol
P.S. Your story's still amazing.
| Kyeire chapter 8 . 7/15/2010
Ho ho ho! Friends with benefits, eh? Michael doesn't sound like a goody goody, does he...
And for some strange reason, I and starting to like Mr. Knocker...why is that? Is it because he doesn't seem mean, only someone who's trying to help her, butjust giving in to her ideas of him wanting to torture her?
I don't think I am right in my conclusion, but I still can't tell myself he's THAT bad...Is he really trying to help her out by showing her the past(to help her get over it?) or is he realy wanting to torture her?
hm...very very interesting! Update soon pleaze!
| salt pillar chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
You do an excellent job of building up suspense. The only things I would suggest are that you make the chapters a little longer and include a little more action.